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By Degrees

Spilling from the lintel, a pitcher saves the ice from anonymity. Rafters creak, the sounds of winter rattle through the cabin eerily. Memories of dead and gone, whistles of wind, the monotony whispers and drags through the days like a chilling lament. Hours burn so slowly, an ember refusing to ebb, reminiscences stutter and fade, no lasting testament. Evenings and mornings now bleed with the same deep regret; he's losing all feeling, as cold as cold can get.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 1/28/2016 11:17:00 AM
"an ember refusing to ebb" - now THAT'S poetry! gorgeous language, keith, with a wonderful ending, too...
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Keith Bickerstaffe
Date: 1/28/2016 11:29:00 AM
Thank you my dear! Your kind remarks are much appreciated. Best wishes, Keith
Date: 1/28/2016 4:57:00 AM
wow, each phrase is filled with such sullen tone wonderfully depicted... beautifully done, keith!..huggs
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