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Butterfly Monarch King

It floats through the air effortlessly Wings beating at high velocity A navigational marvel instinctively It's amazing with 5 stages of puberty With a 4" wingspan it's really impressive Every one tries to catch one for their collection They fly every which way in every direction Stunning beauty seen upon closer inspection The monarch is king of all butterflies the rest pale in comparison Flies from Canada to Mexico to the fourth generation. It's an amazing creature with one distinguishing feature You can tell the male by the black spot on the tail. The complete metamorphosis from one form to another. Reminds me how we too can change from one thing to another. From selfish to kind, from hateful to loving but we must make the choice, as we are free agents, free like the butterfly but without instinctive wisdom we need help from above. John Derek Hamilton December 13,2015

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Date: 12/18/2015 10:30:00 PM
What a beauty in ur words John.. congrats on big win!
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John Hamilton
Date: 12/19/2015 10:43:00 AM
Thanks very much Dr and for your participation in my contest!
Date: 12/18/2015 9:06:00 PM
Congrats John for your placement! -luloo :)
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John Hamilton
Date: 12/19/2015 10:42:00 AM
Thanks Laura, always appreciated. You did very well in my contest! Thanks
Date: 12/18/2015 6:40:00 PM
I agree with Joe, this is a great tale and observation about the Monarch. Kudos to you for such introspection and ability to bring them together in such a winner.
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John Hamilton
Date: 12/19/2015 10:40:00 AM
Thanks Dan I appreciate it.
Date: 12/18/2015 3:02:00 PM
Really enjoyed this Dereck, great tale and observations..' Congrats on the winner..
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John Hamilton
Date: 12/19/2015 10:40:00 AM
Thanks Joe. John
Date: 12/18/2015 10:10:00 AM
You did this very well, congratulations.
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John Hamilton
Date: 12/19/2015 10:38:00 AM
Thanks Richard, you did well in my contest too! Thanks!
Date: 12/18/2015 1:35:00 AM
WOW, John, Congratulations on your wonderful butterfly win. Love LINDA
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John Hamilton
Date: 12/19/2015 10:36:00 AM
Thanks Linda.
Date: 12/18/2015 12:23:00 AM
A lovely write, with a nice bit of philosophy thrown in the mix. Well done, John. Regards, Viv
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John Hamilton
Date: 12/19/2015 10:36:00 AM
Thanks Viv nice to hear from you!
Date: 12/17/2015 8:34:00 PM
Hi John, congratulations on your placement in the butterfly contest. Nice job! Sandra
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John Hamilton
Date: 12/19/2015 10:35:00 AM
Thanks Sandra. You did well in my happiness contest!
Date: 12/17/2015 7:22:00 PM
JOHN, I'm impressed, I guess men can write about any given theme. Thank you for supporting my contest. It was a delight to host. I'm still smiling after reading and closing and posting my new blog. Congratulations on your AWESOME WIN... Stop by my latest Blog "I GUESS THEY CAN... HOW ABOUT IT LADIES???" help celebrate and tell me why you decided to join THIS contest. Looking forward in hearing from you. Love SKAT
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John Hamilton
Date: 12/19/2015 10:34:00 AM
Thanks SKAT

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