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Butterfly Lust

"Butterfly Lust" Oh sweet and tender butterfly, how colorful your dance centered in Earth's naked sky. Beneath daylights over-cast, I'm your audience laying about the green purified grass. Come sweet and tender butterfly, land low to the reach of thy lips with your wings spread wide. Three yards and a cloud of dust, I dissect all your desires borne from the outset of lust. Oh sweet and tender butterfly, how colorful our dance now centered in Earth's naked sky. Pace, G INK-U-SCRIPT 11-1-19

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James Inman

Date: 4/13/2023 8:25:00 PM

Stopped by hoping to find something new, but if you decide to make this your final post here. It is a beauty to end with.

Constance La France

Date: 2/18/2023 7:59:00 AM

Pace, you poem is so beautiful and dreamy, I love it, blessings, Constance

Pace Ink-U-Script
Date: 2/18/2023 8:55:00 AM

I’m so honored by your presence…thank you so much Constance!!! :)

Brenda Chiri

Date: 2/16/2023 1:09:00 PM

Patrick is right where are you G?;)

Patrick Cornwall

Date: 1/3/2022 12:51:00 PM

Hey Mr Pace where are you and why are you not writing my man? I was reading through your writing and I was enjoying them and wondering how you are because since 2019 not one! I’m in the newest Anthology and about to start writing a novel! Writing Poetry has been the greatest relief of my soul! Peace Bro

Pace Ink-U-Script
Date: 2/18/2023 8:56:00 AM

I’m slowly getting back to the swing of things…you all serve as an inspiration to return! Thank you for the support. :)

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 6/29/2021 7:20:00 AM

Great write. good flow and reads good.

Wilma Neels

Date: 2/19/2021 8:32:00 PM

What a lovely way to start my morning.. Love the imagery.. Especially stanza 3 and 4.. Hope you well

Anthony Biaanco

Date: 6/28/2020 9:00:00 AM

Hi Pace, this is fantastic. If you're still around you should try and enter your poem in the love or lust contest...sure winner. Best wishes. Anthony

Juanita Smalls

Date: 2/14/2020 6:52:00 PM

Excellent write Pace. Loved your flow in this work. Very nicely done.

Fj Thomas

Date: 1/3/2020 8:16:00 AM

Been gone a minute; hoping to be a bit more regular :)

Fj Thomas

Date: 1/2/2020 3:16:00 PM

Well this sends the imagination down unexpected paths. Beautiful Pace. Take care :)

Pace Ink-U-Script
Date: 1/3/2020 5:18:00 AM

Happy New Year! It’s been awhile since hearing from you...thank you for starting my year off :) with your visit!

Muddasar Javad

Date: 1/1/2020 12:42:00 AM

love this so much & Such profound wording..! :)

Pace Ink-U-Script
Date: 1/3/2020 5:18:00 AM

Thank you dearly for sharing with me!!!! :)

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 12/5/2019 10:38:00 PM

This is absolutely stunning! Loved every word.

Pace Ink-U-Script
Date: 1/3/2020 5:20:00 AM

Caren thank you for your kind words!!!

Mahtab Bangalee

Date: 12/4/2019 3:53:00 AM

beautiful poem penned; greatly I enjoyed

Pace Ink-U-Script
Date: 1/3/2020 5:21:00 AM

Thank you for your visit and sharing your kind words!!!

Susan Jeavons

Date: 11/29/2019 8:02:00 PM

Very lovely poem! Made me want to be a butterfly! Blessings, Susan

Pace Ink-U-Script
Date: 11/29/2019 9:44:00 PM

I really appreciate your words Susan...thank you!!

Phil Capitano

Date: 11/29/2019 7:12:00 AM

Very sensual poem written in butterfly wings. Strong images caress flighty thoughts. Well done.

Pace Ink-U-Script
Date: 11/29/2019 9:43:00 PM

Phil thank you so much!!

Pashang Salehi

Date: 11/27/2019 3:02:00 PM

This is really great poetry... I enjoyed it a lot...

Pashang Salehi
Date: 12/2/2019 11:28:00 AM

Always...

Pace Ink-U-Script
Date: 11/27/2019 5:47:00 PM

Thank you so much!!! :)

Carla Ingram

Date: 11/27/2019 2:48:00 AM

Beautiful poetry

Pace Ink-U-Script
Date: 11/27/2019 5:07:00 AM

Thank you so much!!! :)

James Inman

Date: 11/26/2019 8:50:00 PM

A wonderful write

Pace Ink-U-Script
Date: 11/27/2019 5:08:00 AM

Thank you so much for stopping by!!!

Riquetta Brown

Date: 11/26/2019 5:37:00 PM

What a beautiful poem!

Riquetta Brown
Date: 11/27/2019 11:59:00 AM

You’re welcome :)

Pace Ink-U-Script
Date: 11/27/2019 5:09:00 AM

Thank you Riquetta for sharing your kind words!!!

Franci Hoffman

Date: 11/26/2019 5:19:00 PM

Delightful piece and full of beautiful imagery. Lovely write!

Pace Ink-U-Script
Date: 11/27/2019 5:12:00 AM

Franci thank you dearly for the visit and sharing your kind words...I really appreciate it!!!

Charles Messina

Date: 11/25/2019 10:06:00 AM

Great poetry ink, Ink. Beautiful write my friend. -Charlie

Pace Ink-U-Script
Date: 11/25/2019 10:48:00 AM

Thank you so much Charlie for stopping by and sharing your kind words!

Eve Roper

Date: 11/19/2019 11:27:00 PM

Nicely done, the imagery is great

Pace Ink-U-Script
Date: 11/25/2019 10:48:00 AM

Thank you dearly for your kind words!

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 11/16/2019 4:34:00 PM

Hello Pace Ink-U-Script, butterflies are beautiful. So many in different colours. Have a nice evening my friend.

Pace Ink-U-Script
Date: 11/25/2019 10:49:00 AM

Thank you so much for stopping by and sharing your kind words!!

Vegter Papyrus

Date: 11/5/2019 6:09:00 PM

The third stanza you're being naughty, i believe. A beautiful piece with astonishing imagery. Nice

Vegter Papyrus
Date: 11/5/2019 7:21:00 PM

I thought so

Pace Ink-U-Script
Date: 11/5/2019 6:31:00 PM

Yes indeed...the Third and Fourth stanza...lol thank you for the visit fam!! :)

Kai Michael Neumann

Date: 11/3/2019 5:28:00 AM

This is beautiful. Great write.Kind wishes, Kai

Pace Ink-U-Script
Date: 11/3/2019 5:48:00 AM

Thank you Kai for the visit! I really appreciate it!