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Butterfly In a Bottle

Slowly opens the eyes Amazed, flutters to the skies Contained. Settles and sighs.

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Paul Callus

Date: 8/23/2014 6:37:00 PM

This is a lovely and peaceful-feeling haiku, Arabelle! Well done; congrats on your win. // paul

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 8/21/2014 5:16:00 AM

Very interesting write, congrats on the win

Robert Lindley

Date: 8/20/2014 10:14:00 PM

Congrats on your win, I really like this one for its great depth..

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/20/2014 3:16:00 PM

I remember this soft sweet one. Congrats!

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 8/20/2014 9:37:00 AM

Arabelle, Congratulations!!! Thank you for the awesome Bottled Up senryu. Stop by my latest blog, "You Sunk My "BATTLESHIP" :)" if you like. I enjoyed closing this contest. Always ~LINDA~

James Fraser

Date: 8/14/2014 3:41:00 PM

Poems about Butterflies, also Roses, my favourite, and this is no exception. Simple words, but saying so much. Love it Arabelle, James :)

Craig Glenister

Date: 8/11/2014 12:21:00 AM

Beautiful haiku..so much to read in it..love to see what you would write about it's release. Powerful stuff..congratulations.

Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 8/9/2014 9:35:00 AM

Congratulations on your fine win. I enjoyed reading this wonderful haiku. Great write! Pandita

Casarah Nance

Date: 8/9/2014 9:29:00 AM

Oh sadly captured, but a beautiful win. Well done :)

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 8/8/2014 9:59:00 PM

Congratulations on the win with this nice haiku, Arabelle.

Ara Belle
Date: 8/9/2014 5:06:00 AM

Thank you, Ram.

Robert Lindley

Date: 8/8/2014 8:34:00 PM

Returning to congratulate you on your win!!

Ara Belle
Date: 8/9/2014 5:06:00 AM

That's thoughtful of you, Robert. Thanks!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/8/2014 7:05:00 PM

this is one of my favorites of what I am seeing. The unconventional rhyme makes it really cute. Congrats.

Ara Belle
Date: 8/9/2014 5:07:00 AM

Thank you, Andrea.

Jan Allison

Date: 8/8/2014 6:55:00 PM

dropping back with my congrats:-) Hugs jan xx

Ara Belle
Date: 8/9/2014 5:08:00 AM

Thank you, Jan. You were the first one who believed in this haiku. LoveLots, Ara

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 8/3/2014 8:02:00 AM

- Love this haiku, Arabelle !!! - both beautiful and touching !!! - Have a nice Sunday. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

John Rey Canon

Date: 7/30/2014 1:45:00 AM

I felt the pain. Love it.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/29/2014 6:42:00 PM

Arabelle, Love the scenario .... Enjoyed the Haiku.... LINDA

Saba Khan

Date: 7/27/2014 6:58:00 PM

Amazing! Good luck Arabelle :) I like your name ;)

Robert Lindley

Date: 7/25/2014 12:03:00 AM

Love it ... A great write. Good luck in the contest.....

Tim Smith

Date: 7/22/2014 11:28:00 PM

How beautiful.... I remember catching butterflies as a kid....hugs Tim

Charmane Bellen

Date: 7/22/2014 10:56:00 AM

love butterflies..goodluck for the contest. happy to see you here ate Ara :-)

Ara Belle
Date: 7/22/2014 4:14:00 PM

Hi Mane... Thank you. Happy to see you here, too. Mwahugs!

Jan Allison

Date: 7/22/2014 10:49:00 AM

Beautiful haiku. Hugs Jan xx