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Butterfly Effect

Butterfly effect; Your wings create thunderstorms, Transformation rains Onto my Lazarus heart To be reborn once again.

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Felicia Jarvis

Date: 3/1/2017 4:47:00 AM

I am amazed. The short poem can convey such a strong message, wounderful!

Deborah Burch

Date: 2/13/2017 2:39:00 PM

Lovely Phil!! Well done and congratulations!!! Hugggs deb

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

Date: 1/26/2017 6:12:00 AM

I like your use of Lazaus here..... mmmmn! i just love butterflies..:) I see a trophy, Congratulations! smiles, Olive ELoisa :)

Phil Capitano
Date: 1/26/2017 8:35:00 AM

I love butterflies too and have used that image in many of my poems. Perhaps you will like "How High the Walls We Build". Thanks. :)

Donna Roberts

Date: 1/17/2017 9:06:00 AM

Congratulations Lovely....this was my entry to concrete crush https://Society6.com/motherof2g2b

Mark Martin

Date: 1/13/2017 11:52:00 AM

Like the Lazarus reference! Congrats Phil! :-)

Phil Capitano
Date: 1/13/2017 1:04:00 PM

Thanks for checking us out. Namaste.

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 1/11/2017 2:51:00 AM

Phil, Wow! That is a well deserved win. Congratulations. :) Dane Ann

Phil Capitano
Date: 1/11/2017 7:45:00 AM

A last minute entry. Thanks.

Afzal Nusker

Date: 1/11/2017 2:41:00 AM

Congrats on your trophy win with this fine, fluttering poem.

Phil Capitano
Date: 1/11/2017 7:44:00 AM

Thanks ;)

Sandra Haight

Date: 1/10/2017 7:16:00 PM

Lovely, Phil. Congratulations on your First Place Trophy win! Sandra

Phil Capitano
Date: 1/10/2017 8:45:00 PM

Thanks Sandra I'm thrilled.

Agnes Krampe

Date: 1/10/2017 6:34:00 PM

Beautiful, Phil. Congrats on your top win. Agnes

Phil Capitano
Date: 1/10/2017 8:45:00 PM

Thanks Agnes for commenting.

Joseph May

Date: 1/10/2017 5:20:00 PM

Congrats on your win Phil

Phil Capitano
Date: 1/10/2017 8:43:00 PM

Thank you Joseph.

Freddie Robinson Jr.

Date: 1/6/2017 8:17:00 AM

Really good tanka, Phil. Love the butterfly metaphor, that always work for me. Strong imagery, nicely written poem. I tried to the find poem "Tags" in your catalog, but I couldn't find it. Maybe you can help direct me on how to find it so I can read it. Love the poem. Peace and love to you.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 1/5/2017 7:39:00 AM

- Lovely written, Phil - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Chris Green

Date: 1/3/2017 9:10:00 AM

You are on a roll my friend. This was fantastic.

Phil Capitano
Date: 1/3/2017 12:43:00 PM

You are too kind my friend.

Deborah Burch

Date: 1/2/2017 7:14:00 PM

Ooooh!! Nice one!! Love this tanka Phil!!! Big Hugggs!! Deb