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Butterfly Blade

oh butterfly how you used to be my friend at night watching you fluttter as blood took over my sight a little winged creature so innocent and sweet nobody knew it was my skin you used to meet butterfly kisses on my skin so nice and cool red ink flowing on the ground into its own pool oh how we loved to cry when morning came and we had to say good bey a day without you made my heart ache walking around with a smile i hade to fake butterfly how could your spell be so strong for i was hooked on you for way to long my arms i have to show for my regret as i used to live my life in red as i broke off your wings your image did fade all that was left was the truth all along, you were just a blade

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D.W. Rodgers

Date: 7/22/2014 9:56:00 AM

It took me a minute but eventually I got it. Touching moving and a bit scarey, glad it moves on. But the entomologist in me would change butterfly to moth as the later are nocturnal. Welcome to Soup

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 7/21/2014 10:40:00 AM

- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup, Amelia :) - I choose your first great and moving written poem - Nice to meet you :) - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- PoetrySoup Rule1: Be kind and keep PoetrySoup a haven. PoetrySoup is a drama free zone(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Skat A

Date: 7/19/2014 5:14:00 PM

Amelia, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight, in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile, others passed, when I first join the soup 4 years ago. I wish you the best when it comes to your compositions. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT

Faye Gibson

Date: 7/18/2014 10:40:00 AM

Welcome to Poetry Soup, Amelia. I am glad you discovered this nice community of writers and hope you enjoy the site. Read the work of other poet's and comment if you find something you like; many poets will return the favor. Over time you will get to "know" some of us. You are welcome to visit my page anytime. Enjoy!

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/17/2014 5:38:00 PM

Amelia, , A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy the community, as I did when I first join, March 2010. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over, to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST, in hopes it inspires you to write another poem. I'm looking forward to following you and your poetry ha-ha a special pair:) here's the link to the contest page. http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_contests/ <---~Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@

Sarpong Kumankoma

Date: 7/17/2014 11:18:00 AM

Very touching...keep it up Hugs,Amos

Sarpong Kumankoma

Date: 7/17/2014 11:15:00 AM

Very touching...keep it up Hugs,Amos

Jan Allison

Date: 7/17/2014 8:19:00 AM

Thiis is very powerful and I guess about self harming. I hope things are more settled in your life now. Hugs Jan xxx

Monterey Sirak

Date: 7/17/2014 6:32:00 AM

Oh my, this is powerful, haunting, sad, and so very real. This is poetry at its finest, when the emotions leap from the page and leave the reader stunned. I hope you are much better and happier now.