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Butterfly

butterfly zig zags its delicate wings flutter bright colors float in the breeze searching for nectar sweet serum from flower's soul that flows forth from life to life butterfly pauses it's thin wings close and open then gently it flies away Written on 7/18/2016 Choka

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Date: 5/22/2017 9:31:00 AM
Hi Laura , sweet poem the beautiful butterfly, I see you won on this one congratulations :)))hugs
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Laura Leiser
Date: 5/22/2017 11:18:00 AM
Thank you, Niall, for noticing this little poem of mine. :)
Date: 7/24/2016 5:48:00 PM
Congratulations on your win.....lovely creature....thankd for being in the contest
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Laura Leiser
Date: 7/24/2016 6:59:00 PM
Thank you, Janis, for placing me in your great contest! I really appreciated it:)
Date: 7/24/2016 5:35:00 PM
Laura, congratulations on your fine win in the 'Choka' contest! Hugs, Sandra
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Laura Leiser
Date: 7/24/2016 6:59:00 PM
Thanks, Sandra :)
Date: 7/24/2016 5:34:00 PM
Big congrats in the contest, Laura.
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Laura Leiser
Date: 7/24/2016 6:59:00 PM
Thank you, Andrea :)
Date: 7/24/2016 3:18:00 PM
Hi Laura, Congratulations on your winning write: -) Alexis
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Laura Leiser
Date: 7/24/2016 4:59:00 PM
Thank you, Alexis :)
Date: 7/24/2016 8:53:00 AM
We both chose the butterfly theme:-) many congrats on your win Laura:-) hugs Jan xx
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Laura Leiser
Date: 7/24/2016 1:35:00 PM
Thanks, Jan :)
Date: 7/21/2016 5:17:00 PM
Beautiful images of this colorful butterfly, Laura. gl in the contest. Regards // paul
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Laura Leiser
Date: 7/22/2016 9:52:00 PM
Thanks, Viv! Hope you're having a good day :)
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Laura Leiser
Date: 7/21/2016 5:29:00 PM
Thank you, Paul :)
Date: 7/19/2016 9:55:00 PM
Great subject matter for the style, Laura- it flits along. Lovely. Will do well, I'm sure. Viv x
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Laura Leiser
Date: 7/21/2016 5:29:00 PM
Thanks, Viv! Hope you're having a good day :)
Date: 7/19/2016 3:59:00 PM
very sweet ending for this one. Good luck in the contest.
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Laura Leiser
Date: 7/19/2016 5:35:00 PM
Thank you, Andrea! I haven't written in awhile, so I appreciate your kind words:)
Date: 7/19/2016 5:51:00 AM
Poetry and butterflies go hand in hand. This poem attests to that Laura. This is lovely! 7 : )
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Laura Leiser
Date: 7/19/2016 5:33:00 PM
Thanks, Connie! I haven't written in awhile...glad you liked it :)

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