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Butterfly

Fluttering wings flap Aerial acrobatics Dancing in the breeze

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 8/25/2009 2:37:00 AM
butterfly-freeddom once more,as the butterfly dances in the sweet wind breeze.i can nearly feel me flying with it there ............awesome,love your style--charma
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Date: 8/24/2009 7:32:00 PM
Never thought of butterflies doing "aerial acrobatics" before, but it's a great description of their unpredictable flight patterns, James. Lovely haiku! Best to you, Carolyn
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Date: 8/24/2009 5:23:00 PM
Very descriptive Haiku. Keep writing. Sara
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