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Butterfly

“butterfly” your mustache must have just escaped and flown off your face

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Yann Rolland

Date: 10/7/2023 8:04:00 PM

this is so subtle about the moustache, a brilliant idea or poet indeed, surprising, thanks Jeff yann

Jeff Connelly
Date: 10/7/2023 8:10:00 PM

Thanks yann. I certainly will never shave mine :-)

Lin Lane

Date: 10/7/2023 8:23:00 AM

That was not at all what I expected to read. But, then that's half the fun of reading you, Jeff. Something like: I was utterly aghast...fast to realize my surprise... when butter went flying across the room. Or some such silliness. Have a fantastic weekend.

Jeff Connelly
Date: 10/7/2023 8:54:00 AM

Thanks Lin. I'm glad you enjoyed it; and enjoy your weekend as well.