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Butterflies Can Kill

my heart missed a beat as your butterfly eyes blinked.... sending a signal your inviting smile made me know the taste of peach.... butterflies can kill no missed heartbeats now my lips played with your softness.... we breathed the same breath © kashinath karmakar ===================== Placement:7th ;(April 2011) By:kashinath karmakar (28th March 2011) Contest:Eyes First Meet Sponsor:Michael J.Falotico

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/28/2013 6:43:00 PM

still love this one. Gosh, look at all your poems. Hard to believe you created so many in such little time, isn't it? Hey, did you see Debs showcased one of your poems at her blog?

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 4/4/2011 5:44:00 AM

Congratulations on your win Kashinath in the contest "Eyes First Meet" sponsored by Michael Falotico. Love, Carol

Francine Roberts

Date: 4/3/2011 7:31:00 PM

lovely entry Kashinath, congrats on your win in the contest

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/2/2011 2:09:00 PM

One of my favorite entries in the contest, Kash. glad to see you on the winners' list. Congratulations,my friend!

Wilma Neels

Date: 4/2/2011 12:24:00 PM

Hey Kash, congratulations on your great win in MJF's contest, enjoyed this one again ;)

James Fraser

Date: 4/2/2011 8:05:00 AM

Most deserved of it's placing in Michael's contest Kashinath....:)

Harry Horsman

Date: 4/2/2011 2:08:00 AM

Just wonderful are these. congrats a worthy winner. Harry

Elaine George

Date: 4/2/2011 1:57:00 AM

Simply lovely string Senryu, Kashinath. Many congrats on your BIG WIN, Lainie

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 4/2/2011 12:11:00 AM

coming back here to congratulate you Kashinath! way to go for your win :D

Tahera Mannan

Date: 4/1/2011 9:42:00 PM

Many many heartiest congrats for this super win dear Kashi.

Joyce Johnson

Date: 4/1/2011 6:08:00 PM

Very sweet. congratulations. Love, Joyce

Sara Kendrick

Date: 4/1/2011 4:19:00 PM

Congratulations on your win..Sara

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 4/1/2011 3:18:00 PM

Congratulations on the seventh place win in the contest of Michael, kashinath

Nette Onclaud

Date: 4/1/2011 3:05:00 PM

whoot, kashi.. congrats!! :) huggs

Audrey Haick

Date: 4/1/2011 3:00:00 PM

Congratulations on your 7th Place win in Michael Contest, Kashinath! Always, Annalise

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 4/1/2011 2:41:00 PM

Gosh, I love this one just as much the second time around, Kash. Congratulations on your win in Michael's contest! Love, Carolyn

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 4/1/2011 2:27:00 PM

Congrats K K on your win in my contest...luv Michael

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 4/1/2011 2:27:00 PM

Congrats Kashinath on your 7th place win in Michael's cool contest about those eyes ... enjoy another wonderful top ten win with luv my friend.. for an exciting entry ...

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 4/1/2011 9:15:00 AM

interesting and provocative short verse! Light & Love

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 3/31/2011 6:33:00 AM

nice sensual poem...well written. thanks for straightening me out on that quintain poem. I had hit the wrong button/click!

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 3/29/2011 4:44:00 PM

Nice meeting of the eyes and then what followed, stunning entry, kashinath

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 3/29/2011 12:24:00 PM

This sure is very sweet, Kashinath-- I suppose being "killed" by a butterfly isn't so bad after all-- it actually sounds romantic...wish you the best in the contest :)

Wilma Neels

Date: 3/29/2011 12:01:00 PM

Absolutely enjoyed this one Kash, fabulous approach.. Wishing you all the best for MJF's contest with this beauty ;)

Sara Kendrick

Date: 3/29/2011 11:45:00 AM

Great one that is so descriptive and creative...Enjoyed reading this afternoon..Good luck in the contest with this sure winner..Thanks for the uplifting comments about my work..Sara

Nette Onclaud

Date: 3/29/2011 10:18:00 AM

ohhhh, i'm getting the goooey feeling of this sugary piece... enchanting, kashi with lots of winning luck... sure winner for me..:) huggs!