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Butterflies

I love you That’s what we’ve said, for the past 20 years But, is it what we mean? I don't know, I'm confused. Maybe we do mean it, maybe we don't. Some days I love you, you’re my whole world, my everything. You glance at me and grin. While, I just look away You always tell me you’re in love, but how do I really know? You could be lying, and that frightens me. So, I just look at you and grin. And I say I love you, but what does that mean? What does it mean? We all think of it different, You might love me, like I love my dog. But. I love you. Like Noah loves Allie. When you look at me and smile, I get this uncomfortable feeling in my stomach. Butterflies. I think that's what they’re called. It is a weird feeling, But, I guess that means I love you.

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Date: 3/14/2016 1:07:00 PM
- Thank you for your first poem, Hayden :) - I welcome you to Poetry Soup :) - Hope you will find our "soup" friendly and fun - Good luck :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 3/12/2016 9:51:00 PM
Hayden, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 3/9/2016 1:00:00 PM
Hayden,, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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