Butterflies

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It should have been breathe, I got lazy, Thank you Judy

BUTTERFLIES I could have been the one to make you see, had not your heart been closed to my advance! Had not your eyes been turned away from me, and if you’d only given me one chance; if you had only heard the cries of pain, each time you turned away, or dropped your eyes, each wound was deep, and left its blood soaked stain, but never stopped the birth of butter?ies within this life, whenever you were there, I’d never have to see you, they would know, and challenge me to things my heart would dare, from deep within; but I could never go right up to you! My knees would fail--but fast! and you would laugh--and I would breathe my last. © ron wilson Arbuthnot aka Vee Bdosa theDoylestown Poet

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Judy Konos

Date: 9/4/2015 3:27:00 PM

Enjoyed...and now I await your next, 'so much More Than Love' ....

Vee Bdosa
Date: 9/4/2015 4:43:00 PM

Ok thank you Judy, yes it should be breathe. I ran out of "e"'s I guess.

Eileen Manassian

Date: 9/4/2015 9:18:00 AM

I can see why Judy likes your writing so much. I love sonnets....This was a beautiful piece, and that final couplet really brought it home.

Vee Bdosa
Date: 9/4/2015 10:04:00 AM

Thank you Eileen, yep Judy has been a tremndous influence on my poetry for several years,,also, Maya Angelou, when I first started writing seriously, Maya read some of it, and liked it enough to contact me and gave me lots of tips that I still use to this very day. Judy,too and Judy and I have written a few together. She is truly a dedicated poet and dedicated to poetry. We need more like her.