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Butterflies

“ UNSUPPORTED CODE “ © Butterflies with purpose Chrysalis on the wings Steadfast in their focus As if remembering All flowers in each garden Each petal opening Velvet-gloried colors In quiet chorus sing Flirting synced awaiting Euphony all within. C-More ®

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Skat A

Date: 1/2/2016 12:14:00 AM

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 5/26/2015 9:56:00 AM

I like the layout as well as the poem itself.

Audley Hitchins
Date: 6/7/2015 2:16:00 PM

Many thanks, Richard Lamoureux, for your kind comment. I'm indeed glad that you liked, encouraging as it is, even while admiring your work as well.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/25/2015 3:07:00 PM

this is beautiful, Audley. I see you got 'unsupported code" above your poem. go inside the edit page and do exactly what it tells you to do at the beginning and the ending of our poem. Hope it works for you!!

Audley Hitchins
Date: 6/7/2015 2:33:00 PM

I'm delighted that you enjoyed, Andrea Dietrich. Many thanks, as too, for your directive, re 'code'. I'll certainly bear this in mind. ;-)

Skat A

Date: 5/23/2015 2:55:00 AM

AUDLEY, thank you for sharing, it was a delight to read. **SKAT**