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Butterflies

(my mind hath looked upon the speaking face of earth and heaven as her prime teacher......[Wordsworth]) I saw two butterflies wrapped in silent passion, Her heart-shaped wings splayed flat against the sill Her torso throbbing in anticipation... Himself, hovering gently to hold her still. I saw their sleek brown bodies tightly pressed, His feet clinging to her lest the wind Tear him away. I saw the shadows rest Around them and the midday sun descend, And still they lay outside my window pane... I wondered why it is that we must rush And why my timid touches are but vain And useless gestures, why he must always crush The urgings. Nature’s children seem to know That love is best when cherished soft and slow

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Date: 1/23/2014 4:47:00 PM
Would you like to work on a Crown of Sonnets with us? read my blog please. Light & Love
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Karen Ruff
Date: 1/26/2014 4:55:00 PM
I could try. I think I understand the rules. In other words, I wouldn't know what the first line of mine is to be until I see the last line of whoever is supposed to come before me?
Date: 1/10/2014 9:37:00 AM
How lovely and the play with internal rhyme is so effective. The alliteration is wonderful. Much enjoyed. And the volta ... sigh, nice volta! Cheers!
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Karen Ruff
Date: 1/10/2014 5:47:00 PM
Thank you so much. Alliteration could be said to be my trade mark, I suppose. I tend to fall into it even in prose.
Date: 1/4/2014 12:31:00 PM
lovely Karen...Just beautiful. Try for the contest..its to good to pass up. BG
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