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Butterflies

Flying, Beautiful, Terrifying creatures. As a young girl, I went to a butterfly museum on a school field trip. I'll never forget that day these colorful, fragile little things with wings were flying in the open air as I entered the spacious place. Cages were forbidden They were free They could rest and perch anywhere they pleased. They didn't have a care in the world. A few of them landed on my shoulder, my chest, and my arms, and I panicked. My cousin was there and she laughed and pointed as I flailed and screamed doing anything to get these terrifying little beauties off of me. It worked. Frightened, they fluttered away only to land on someone else and, me, I dodged every other one of those monsters that came my way. After it all ended, and we were loading back on the school bus, I was relieved that those harmless little beasts weren't anywhere near me anymore. Those Flying Terrifyingly Beautiful Creatures.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 6/25/2010 4:09:00 PM
Bad experience for a child ....Sometimes for some children those butterflies or any bug that is really harmless can be very scary..Thanks for the help on the Sonnet ...I will call it Poetic License..I chose to write it that way..Keep your creative pen flowing..Sara
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Date: 6/25/2010 2:24:00 PM
I like this descriptive poem of your adventure with the butterflies. It flows very well and is quite imaginative. Welcome to Poetry Soup and keep writing. Blessings, Joseph
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