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Buterflies and Sweet Breezes

blessing, butterfly, nature, Butterflies And Sweet Breezes (Copywritted by didee) Colourful butterflies dance on the tail Of returning scented breezes That coursed the meadows and moor's Doorways left open and ajar To guide all breeze's flights in and out With the taking of mixed ambrosia whiffs All swept from their bedded lawns glory The scented cargoes fill with nectar spawn Meant to tempt many a 'bypass tour' back. And it is now on the returning breeze's tail The butterflies will be brought to drink on nectar While giving a show of dance they will flit about Flying from bloom to bloom to gather and drink Where many butterflies will skip, jump and feed Until drunk on great cups of mead and made merry. And it is with their tiny hands and feet That touch ed-down on the ripe pollen within That nature has intended to be bandied about For a full blooming proportional rebirth next year!

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Date: 6/9/2015 6:08:00 AM
This is a beautifully written piece, I enjoyed the journey of the butterfly! I could actually "SEE" it... Well written... Thank you for sharing... Tanya
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Diane M Quinlan
Date: 6/19/2015 3:14:00 PM
I had forgotten to really take a good look on this and when I did, I saw that there was indeed some revisions to be made---must have been doing this very late at night during my (one of many) sleepless poetry binges...thanks for taking the 'tour' and am so glad you enjoyed the read....take care Tanya!....didee
Date: 6/5/2015 7:54:00 AM
- A lovely "summer" poem, I enjoy reading it Diane :) - // Anne-Lise :)
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Diane M Quinlan
Date: 6/5/2015 12:25:00 PM
I am always glad to receive a comment from you. Your read was enjoyed I see as is to date some of your work that I have read! Back to you....didee

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