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But Mr John

But mr John Smith, you know old son, dreams are better than reality, the hotter dames, incite burning flames, more erotic than originality, the prune by hurricane strewn, gets erased digitalicky? monsoon mongone, become begone, might be forgone fatality.... Don Johnson
re John's prune by the hurricane strewn...

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Date: 1/10/2012 7:07:00 AM
I enjoyed reading your great poetry this morning Dion. I hope to be able to read a lot more of your writing in this new year of 2012. Love, Carol
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Date: 1/9/2012 8:11:00 PM
You are very clever young Don!Hugs Lizzie
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Date: 1/9/2012 4:41:00 PM
Great, interesting read...I love the write! You always bring the fascinating stuff to your poems and you never hold back, I like that!! "...prune by hurricane strewn..." is totally a brilliant line, congratulations on a job well done Don!! Awesome Work!!
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Date: 1/9/2012 4:21:00 PM
Interesting....hmmmm....your spell-check mustn't be persnickity...lol Cute !!
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Date: 1/9/2012 3:29:00 PM
Don, it looks as if you have invented a few new words here. Nevertheless, it is an interesting read.
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