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But I Had It

i'm still rising,but i had it i was running,flashing few thing you couldn't keep up,you were falling slowly... catching it up,keeping up too its was flying,but i had to you did't even notice,and how could you have it... dreaming of it,imagine i had it keeping it high,setting me free you are watching,feeled with anger but how did,you get it i was ahead, but i missed it how could i, even dream if falling slowly and you have it though i was first, i did't notice i'm still rising,but i had it

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Date: 5/26/2016 10:37:00 PM
You have a certain way with poetry... Enjoyed. Pd
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Ankit Vaidya
Date: 5/27/2016 5:16:00 AM
thank you alot
Date: 5/26/2016 6:12:00 PM
sad you had it, and it slipped away, Good poem, Ankit. skat
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Ankit Vaidya
Date: 5/27/2016 5:16:00 AM
thank you skat

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