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But a Whisper

As I held your Limp lifeless form The blank stare from Your once all seeing eyes I felt the warmth leave And a bitter cold Creep over your shell Of a figure your moans Seemingly the only sign Of life stabbing my heart I am not God! But my poor Soul whom I love so dear I can not bare the suffering If I could but whisper in your ear And breathe life into your core I would change places with you But I fear the worms are calling From their damp dark soil And your soul will be ferried somewhere But your shell will remain to toil I hold you close one last time As is meant to be not my choice I feel so empty Suffer no more love Our parting will be short lived A part of me will go with you It is all I have to give I am not God! But if I could But whisper and breathe life Back into you I would hold You forever

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Date: 1/2/2024 4:28:00 PM
But A Whisper...wonderfully poetic, nice blessings Amy
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Date: 2/11/2022 4:26:00 PM
I am always amazed how e can put on paper our most intimate feeling for the love we have just lost, be it wife, husband, child, parent or lover. I felt your sorrow. Thankyou for sharing.
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Date: 1/25/2016 11:37:00 PM
Achingly beautiful and bittersweet... '...if I could but...breathe life into you core,' '...a part of me will go with you,' simply true and heartfelt. You really know how to tug on the heartstrings! Well done Kelli!! Best wishes, Keith
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Kelli White
Date: 1/26/2016 2:42:00 AM
It is true unadulterated feelings that I write with and ingredient you cannot fake. Thank you Keith. Love Kelli
Date: 8/20/2015 6:01:00 AM
that made me cry,
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Kelli White
Date: 8/20/2015 6:21:00 AM
so tender is the gift of life but even more so when it is taken away
Date: 8/9/2015 5:28:00 PM
Very touching. Am sorry about the loss of your pet. Welcome to soup.
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Kelli White
Date: 9/4/2015 10:10:00 PM
Ty very much.
Date: 7/30/2015 7:55:00 AM
Hi, Kelli, I am so sorry for the loss of your pet. Are you new here? I only see 5 poems. Welcome to the Soup. And call on any of us if you have questions. We're here for each other. Thanks for reading one of my poems. ~~~Darlene
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Kelli White
Date: 9/4/2015 10:11:00 PM
Ty very much. Yes I am new to this forum.
Date: 7/26/2015 2:09:00 PM
oh it is simply heartbreaking when you lose a pet - this is very tender and beautifully written:-) Hugs Jan xx7
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Kelli White
Date: 7/26/2015 2:12:00 PM
I felt so helpless. Ty

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