Busted

It tests the air as delicately as snail eyes. Dog! Put out that joint!

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Kelly Zakerski

Date: 9/24/2009 3:05:00 AM

I love it!

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 7/16/2009 3:17:00 PM

Oh my goodness Sue. I am walking in my list of favs today. Of course your there don't ask. I picked this poem to read and almost peed my drawers. Made my day thank you. Love, Carol

Sajdah Al-Riyami

Date: 6/12/2009 9:21:00 AM

Dog!put out that Joint**HAHA**Lauffs!

Date: 5/29/2009 4:45:00 PM

Got a chuckle out of this one with your creative and direct approach. Nice one! Have a good weekend. Karen

Nadia Shahwan

Date: 5/28/2009 7:56:00 AM

Very beautiful. Thank u for commenting my poem...re. LongLive- may I say read between the lines? I'm not against the other peaceful religion in this pretty world; history recorded many pains. Wishing you all the best.

John Loving Iii

Date: 5/27/2009 4:35:00 PM

what you know about dat! jhl

Daver Austin

Date: 5/27/2009 3:19:00 PM

Oooooowwww, Mary Jane! No thanks. My mind is warped enough, thank you. Good write, Sue, as usual. Love, daver

Yoni Dvorkis

Date: 5/27/2009 11:44:00 AM

I feel kind of lost with this one. Is this a literal dog smoking a J? If it's metaphor how does it test the air? Sorry don't mean to be nitpicky I just want to get the joke really...

Nathan Leccese

Date: 5/27/2009 10:58:00 AM

lol This is awesome Sue. Thanks for the comment and I have already entered "Discovering Purpose" in his contest. Nate

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 5/26/2009 7:49:00 PM

This is cute, Sue. Needed to read something uplifting tonight and you came through big time here! Love, Carolyn