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Bus Ride

I glance at my watch, Shake my head at the hands, And count silver cars While I patiently stand. Three minutes, Five minutes, Ten minutes late. Time ticks away, And still I must wait. Traffic flows by Like an ocean of steel, Pausing at times - Liquid automobiles. I laugh to myself: Who would have presumed? Environmentalists Forced to inhale the fumes! It comes into view: The great whale of this sea. It sprays its exhaust - Remorseless, it seems. An eager step forth - But its presence misleads. My sigh is a cloud. "Out of service," it reads. Minutes tick by, Till its cousin arrives And opens its doors To admit our grim line. We pack ourselves in, Like sardines in a can. No free seat in sight - So we awkwardly stand. By the time I can see My stop up ahead, I'm an hour behind And my feet feel like lead. I push my way off, As if freed from a jail. Now I know Ahab's pain - To be wronged by a whale.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 10/13/2013 1:37:00 AM
heather... CONGRATULATIONS:) on having your poem featured on the soups HOME PAGE. goodnight. <3 =LINDA=
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Date: 10/8/2013 11:14:00 AM
Brings back those big-city days, waiting for a trolley - the counting white walls. Good stuff. Congrats on the selection. daver
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Date: 7/19/2013 2:31:00 PM
oh, dang, my soupmail has been emptied!!! What?? ?And I can't access it either. ARE you able to ? I was just gonna tell you the judge of that contest poem you mentioned today did not like my poem much because I did not make the list and I don't understand her reasoning (II did not have any errors in it) but thanks for visiting it. Luv, Andrea
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Date: 7/19/2013 2:27:00 PM
haha, just remembering this one from last time I saw it. ummm, soupmail.
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Date: 7/4/2013 9:19:00 AM
haha, this could be called Riding the Whale or something!! Can't believe I found this oldie of yours that was new to me. It's cute and would work well in a contest about pet peeves!
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Date: 4/14/2013 3:48:00 PM
love this Heather just trawling in your oldies,, also can relate to the poem.. and it's visual aspects..
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Date: 3/20/2013 7:31:00 AM
Ha...entertaining write...there's not a bus within 80 miles of me...love that ending, Heather!
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Date: 12/19/2012 12:56:00 PM
This is very good. I feel your pain, I am not a very happy or patient waiter when it comes to buses planes or ferries.
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Date: 10/6/2012 10:18:00 PM
Thanks for sharing my friend... really enjoyed reading it! Hugs, Jack xox
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Date: 3/22/2012 4:22:00 PM
This has a very nice flow to it. I really enjoyed the humor here. Great piece of writing indeed.
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Heather Ober
Date: 5/5/2012 6:20:00 AM
Thanks, Melanie!
Date: 3/7/2012 1:25:00 AM
Good poem with nice flow.All can relate to it.Enjoyed the read.
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Heather Ober
Date: 5/5/2012 6:20:00 AM
Thank you, Kash!
Date: 1/28/2012 3:26:00 PM
By you a car Heather,the bus are always to late.Like yours poem. - oxox love Anne-Lise
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Heather Ober
Date: 5/5/2012 6:21:00 AM
A car would be nice ;)
Date: 1/23/2012 10:45:00 AM
Love this! :)
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Heather Ober
Date: 5/5/2012 6:21:00 AM
Thanks :)

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