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Bus Experience

Piles of human arms and sloppy heads laid On food-trays of half-eaten buns with cold tea Magazines, milk bottles, and jackets Passed us by in a whisk of infinity; You never once moved but peacefully slept Just this night---- Amidst the chill of a bus-filled moment. In deep amens, I hold your face for a while But time beckons military hours, grating; I write you a letter of love that never questions As courage greets me again on enemy zones. I stay a bit longer even while duty calls Shall I leave you once more After a lit embrace seemingly endless? My only gesture is to let you know of my fidelity And you rest while I slowly walk out the bus door. Tell me, who is the better person? Henry W. Contest...Brief, Unforgettable Moment Date Nov 25, 2013

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Date: 12/1/2013 9:19:00 PM
I love your descript images and the emotions you captured. Congrats, Henry!
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Date: 12/1/2013 6:20:00 AM
An excellent write this is my dear friend. I love this poem & the story you've shared. Thank you so much for sharing! My big hearty congratulations on your great win! love lots and big hugs, Leonora
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Date: 11/29/2013 11:23:00 PM
this one makes me sad, leaves me to ponder how she feels after. a very great and sad brief moment, Henry. congrats on the big win.
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Date: 11/29/2013 10:16:00 PM
good poem...congrats on your win :)
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Date: 11/29/2013 10:14:00 PM
Its hard for both...many congratulations... enjoyed this very much...
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Date: 11/29/2013 7:16:00 PM
Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
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Date: 11/29/2013 6:23:00 PM
Way to go on the contest.
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Date: 11/29/2013 12:04:00 PM
- Congratulations on your winning poem in: - BRIEF, UNFORGETTABLE MOMENT / / Nette Onclaud contest. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 11/26/2013 1:17:00 AM
thank you, henry... pleased to have you.. huggs
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