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Burst of Petals

ruffled flowerets gather to tickle my face, waving their skirts in sweet windlblown grace as we all tumble under daybreak’s amber strands , zoom! a rocket of rainbow dances in celestial plays; bursting a hundred droplets on one rare springtime blaze single quintain ------------------------ Contest: PD's Rainbow By: nette onclaud

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 5/23/2014 9:02:00 PM
Nette This is a very descriptive and nice write. Very serene and charming. Thank you for the great comment on my Shakespeare poem.
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Date: 1/30/2012 9:28:00 PM
congrats Nette luv on a lovely win for lovely words on Spring.. seeing those petals openong...luv..
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Date: 1/30/2012 5:43:00 PM
Congrats, nette. Awesome write. Enjoyed. Nice going. Best to you and yours. luv Ralph
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Date: 1/30/2012 12:20:00 PM
Congratulations on your great win in my "Spring" contest Nette. Thank you for supporting my contest. Love, Carol
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Date: 1/10/2012 2:27:00 AM
Beautiful.
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Date: 12/19/2011 12:05:00 PM
Congratulation on your fantastic win, my friend. bl
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Date: 12/19/2011 5:45:00 AM
Congratulations on your super placement in ^Rick's "5~8 Line Poetry" contest Nette. Love, Carol
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Date: 12/18/2011 3:17:00 PM
ahhh human or floral? mkes one ponder the possibilitys Congrad's Happy Holy Days!
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Date: 12/17/2011 6:48:00 PM
What a beautiful Quintain, Nette! You have brightened my day by your pleasurable write! I now smile because of your wonderful poem!! Awesome Work!!
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Date: 12/17/2011 7:14:00 AM
A mesmerizing Write here Nette! Wonderful imagery .Love it!Best wishes for the contest.Visit me.
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Date: 12/17/2011 4:49:00 AM
As usual another enchanting display of your colourful 'wordburst', nette..enjoyed..been away for a while..hope all is well, jag
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