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Burnt Coffee

It started with the sound of white noise and the smell of her anxiety Her flaxen hair, spun like silver four blue eyes, Electrified, and Brushstrokes across his cheek, entire paintings under his eyes; Her certain sunshine because now anxiety is only A word. there was the Taste of burnt coffee, the color of her eyes and she hated it but Burnt coffee was his favorite. When the silver stopped spinning and a part of herself that never Loved her either started killing Herself from the inside out He could only watch because the only person That could save her didn’t care enough He tried so desperately to touch Her one last time but her eyes went black and He never drank burnt coffee again.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 7/3/2016 12:25:00 AM
nice to see this one again. Stacy..skat
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Date: 5/17/2015 12:16:00 PM
- Congratulations on your first poems here at P-Soup - A pleasure to welcome you, Stacy :) - Hope you will find this page interesting and post many more thoughts and words in the future - Good luck :) - // Anne-Lise
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Date: 5/16/2015 2:33:00 PM
Stacy, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry when you are ready :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 5/16/2015 8:22:00 AM
Stacy, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 5/15/2015 1:54:00 AM
Good work. 7
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Stacy Hsu
Date: 5/16/2015 9:17:00 AM
Thanks so much! Are there any suggestions you're willing to give to improve my work?

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