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In your voice I felt the presence of ice When you said we are together no longer You had my love, my everlasting vice Turning it away when you tried to be stronger I had been fooled to believe it would work You couldn't look past a single obstacle You assumed by my smile I had to be a jerk This timing for sorrow is nothing but impeccable How could you forsake the things you said? How could you do this to me for nothing? How come my affections you only led? I can not believe you ever loved me. Promises you made and on foolishness I trusted. If you can't keep them you shouldn't have spoken The second burn is when my affections are busted Tear away this heart of a spoiled sad token I can not believe you ever loved me I can not believe you ever loved me You never loved me Never loved me

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 2/25/2013 8:32:00 PM
mm...the heartbreak of having what we loved and then realizing it was a lie. Its a painful place to be. Great write Jordan!
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Date: 1/10/2013 1:58:00 AM
I enjoyed stopping by tonight.
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Jordan Dickinson
Date: 1/10/2013 3:27:00 PM
Thank you for stopping by Charles, it is much appreciated!
Date: 1/9/2013 9:05:00 PM
So many are quick to say the words we want to hear...and often has no depth.
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Date: 1/10/2013 3:28:00 PM
I wish it wasn't as such. I am a very quiet person, if I say something it would have been thought over thoroughly before expressed. Thank you for reading, I hope you liked it !
Date: 1/9/2013 7:38:00 PM
What a poem. Been there and done that. Take care, Jancarl
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Jordan Dickinson
Date: 1/10/2013 3:29:00 PM
Take care as well Jancarl, Thank you for reading my words I wish you the best!
Date: 1/9/2013 6:10:00 PM
Enjoyed reading your work! Awesome write!
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Date: 1/10/2013 3:29:00 PM
Thank you for reading it! It is much appreciated!!
Date: 1/9/2013 6:09:00 PM
Sometimes..many times...those words were only meant for the moment they were said and not forever..Light & Love
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Jordan Dickinson
Date: 1/10/2013 3:30:00 PM
I thank you for reading this poem of mine and giving me some personal insight. I will continue looking forward to the person whose words are forever. Take care Debbie!!

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