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Burnt-Out

You puzzle me boy, round and round This splintered time living in my head I’m losing control with your late- street life; Is this your face now, like a gas mask Red nicotine shades my half-closed eyes, And when I awake you go to bed, hazed. This new facade, a filthy smokescreen A wisp pulsing on specks of dark; Sorry, there’s no last deal; it’s gone too far You can burn, burn the shadows thin While jiggle of your boogie nights Chars our spaced-out dreams. Flickers dim a love once true Yeah get your fix, boy; waste your hours The distance between us blows Circles in your eyes drift by the sill, Although I find a puff of jolt in your hush It’s time to go; that potion breathes in black. --Rock And Roll Groove It Contest Posted 10/8/2013 Carly Lalion

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Date: 11/3/2013 1:45:00 PM
- Hi Carly, congrats on your win, well done !!! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 11/1/2013 7:45:00 AM
congratulations on your win carly xx
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Date: 10/30/2013 12:26:00 PM
Carly, , enjoyed your GROOVE IT win............. ~LOVE SKAT~
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Date: 10/28/2013 11:58:00 AM
Carly, ... congratulations on your win...LINDA
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Date: 10/28/2013 7:52:00 AM
Congrats on the win in the contest, carly
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Date: 10/27/2013 8:32:00 PM
nicely penned poem, congrats on your win, enjoyed this one :)
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