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Burning Soul

Burning Soul My shaken soul, burning as coal, Beyond console, as dreams shattered ! Emotions stance, yet beats enhance, Ecstatic trance, and tears spattered ! But with all these smashed and dashed dreams, world is still a beautiful place........ Written by Dr. Upma A. Sharma On December 9th, 2014 For nette's desiderata contest On theme-3 Awarded 7th place

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Date: 12/26/2014 9:10:00 PM
DR UPMA, CONGRATULATIONS on your "DESIDERATA," winning poem... always ~LINDA~
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Date: 12/16/2014 9:56:00 AM
I love that last line, and tears splattered. That says it all. Congratulations on your win Dr. Sharma.
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Date: 12/16/2014 5:54:00 AM
very evocative images capturing the wonder of our world, dr upma..a pleasure to have you in my contest with my big congrats!
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Date: 12/14/2014 6:53:00 PM
I enjoyed your poem, Dr. Upma! Nicely done for the theme you chose. Congratulations! Sandra
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Date: 12/14/2014 4:09:00 PM
Well done, Upma! Not all is perfect, but if we do try, this world of ours can be such a beautiful place to live in. Congrats on your fine win. // paul
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Date: 12/14/2014 11:00:00 AM
Congratulations for your win, dear. The theme you chose was a very popular one.
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Date: 12/14/2014 9:41:00 AM
beautifully written Dr Sharma many congrats:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 12/14/2014 8:04:00 AM
Nicely done...congratulations on your win
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Date: 12/14/2014 4:40:00 AM
I like the unforced rhyme in he poem, congratulations on he win, Dr. Upma
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Date: 12/14/2014 1:14:00 AM
A great work, congtrats on the win Upma...huggs
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