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Burning Songs of Love

O' but how your colorful light adorn I pity my spirit ravaged and torn if only a word to find shall I speak with failing breath knees trembling and weak If only I should be the chosen one as a fare virgin flower to the sun surely moments shall touch the evermore of lofty heights entwinning as one we soar In vespers I kneel to greet my sweet dream where each fleshly desire pulsate and teem like an endless novel of fleshly rage our romantic play premier's center stage But for in a moment silence consumes within this trapped mind agony and doom if only a glance if to look my way surely seduction would birth endless days Writing this novel of endless desire alone, breathless, I feed the raging fire 8-1-2016

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Date: 2/17/2017 8:27:00 AM
Congrats on your win, Rick.
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Date: 8/12/2016 12:48:00 PM
An excellent, passionate write, Rick! Congrats on your win. Blessings!
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Date: 8/7/2016 9:00:00 AM
Well done Rick, a most deserved honor...
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Date: 8/6/2016 9:47:00 AM
This is quite good!
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Rick Parise
Date: 8/6/2016 5:18:00 PM
Thank you Sir!!!!!!!
Date: 8/6/2016 12:40:00 AM
Lovely Rick, I was wondering who wrote this lovely gem ..... :) Congrats on your awesome win. Stop by my latest blog "Little Me - Guess Who" and celebrate your win. Forever and Ever **SKAT**
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Rick Parise
Date: 8/6/2016 5:17:00 PM
Thank YOU SKAT Master A.........I'll' check the Blog LOVE & LIGHT
Date: 8/2/2016 9:18:00 AM
A scintillating write, where lust seduces and explodes...
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Rick Parise
Date: 8/2/2016 3:22:00 PM
Thank you Sir- I wrote this poem for the Sonnet contest......Then found my pen was a bit long winded (LOL) Hope you read my NEW Sonnet I posted today. ( Sacred Oath )

Book: Shattered Sighs