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Burning Embers

When love walked through the door I met a feeling I never knew before It burned right through my heart Yet healed me from the start He was an angel full of light A perfect spark; a great delight He looked like a god from head to feet You’re the love of my life; a burning heat Burning embers one by one I break every time you are gone My world suddenly turns into black But gets all better when you are back Burning embers with sweet love You are my cupid from above Because love doesn’t have any bars We have a place up in the stars I remember the time I was broken apart But that changed when you mended my heart By: Julie Alcin

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 2/22/2013 6:20:00 PM
this is very nice, Julie. Congrats on your win.
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Date: 2/22/2013 12:50:00 AM
Hi congratulations Julie luv, this is a lovely write and well deserving of a winning spot...I am hoping for more time next week for more reading and commenting xx
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Date: 2/22/2013 12:06:00 AM
Nice love poem and great win. Congratulations. Joyce
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Date: 2/21/2013 5:47:00 PM
A love does seem to complete us...enjoyed. Congrats on your win!!
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Date: 2/21/2013 5:12:00 PM
Julie, congratulations! in Gail's "Burning Embers " contest.. a delightful burring poem.. always~ PD
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