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Burning Embers

As the embers of love were dying Slowly ready to die a slow death The tears no more, there’s no more sighing No chance even with a loving breath To accept love was over was hard The sap was now drained no more to rise The leaves had finally left the tree Then embers grew in another’s eyes The fire of love did burn and did grow The ageing tree did waken anew The embers caught with loves fresh blow The sap intense between me and you To love late in life is a blessing Fetch me my love, as time is pressing © ~GG~08/02/2013 Contest entry: Burning Embers

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Date: 5/1/2013 1:12:00 PM
hello...a collection of words tht defines the truth tht's wot i got to learn....natural ethics. n thnkeu for ua kind apprecation...thnk''s alot
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Date: 3/15/2013 4:04:00 PM
Hello Many, This also is one I read again and again, lovely ....... Shar
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Date: 3/4/2013 12:36:00 PM
Never too late for love.....terrific write and win! Hugs
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Date: 2/23/2013 12:04:00 PM
Great write Mandy. Enjoyed reading it a lot. Many congrats and thanks for commenting on my haiku. -- Sean
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Date: 2/22/2013 7:24:00 PM
The ending lines are good. Oh, how do I love to love late in my lonely love life!!! A blessing no doubt.
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Date: 2/22/2013 7:57:00 AM
Congrats on your well deserved win. It reads like words from your heart. Warm Smiles, Connie
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Date: 2/21/2013 11:43:00 PM
How nice. I liked this better than some that came in ahead. Great writing Mandy. Love, Joyce
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Date: 2/22/2013 12:31:00 AM
Bless you Joyce I appreciate that xx
Date: 2/21/2013 7:13:00 PM
congrats on a fine win Mandy
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Date: 2/22/2013 12:32:00 AM
Thanks Joseph xx
Date: 2/21/2013 6:21:00 PM
Congrats Mandy.....:-)
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Date: 2/22/2013 12:32:00 AM
Thanks Donna luv , hope to got get more time soon to start reading and commenting again xx
Date: 2/21/2013 5:28:00 PM
Late life love embers renewed... ahhh it is always hopeful. Love this !! Well thought out and written. Congrats on your win !!
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Date: 2/22/2013 12:33:00 AM
Ha, where there' life there's hope, as they say Debra xx
Date: 2/21/2013 5:10:00 PM
Mandy, congratulations! in Gail's "Burning Embers " contest.. a delightful burring poem.. always~ PD
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Date: 2/22/2013 12:34:00 AM
Thanks pd xx
Date: 2/12/2013 2:28:00 PM
Beautiful, truly in your words. Can really sense the deep feelings in this descriptive poem.
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Date: 2/22/2013 12:35:00 AM
Thanks Caleah i appreciate that xx
Date: 2/9/2013 8:15:00 PM
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Date: 2/22/2013 12:36:00 AM
oxo xx
Date: 2/9/2013 8:44:00 AM
your sonnets are so special,, written for today, by todays poet...
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Date: 2/9/2013 8:48:00 AM
bless you harry xx
Date: 2/8/2013 5:15:00 PM
Very lovely...good luck.
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Date: 2/9/2013 8:48:00 AM
thanks Donna I appreciate your visit xx

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