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Burning Candle

Body ‘s a burning candle, breath ’s oxygen Mind ‘s a traffic-flow of thoughts smile ‘s inspiration Concentration ‘s discipline, ideas ‘re sparks Silence is a glow that lights up the path Awareness comes from introspection Perseverance leads to wisdom Surrender brings true freedom

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Sotto Poet

Date: 10/12/2023 7:13:00 PM

Smita, Being obedient unlocks true release, a powerful concept that resonates with me. Those remarks have great insight. I'm fascinated by the idea that quiet has an ethereal glow that illuminates our trip. I am very grateful for your comments and encouragement on my page.

Smita Kulkarni
Date: 10/14/2023 8:39:00 AM

Thanks for stopping by and writing some inspiring words through your feedback!

Susan Lawrence

Date: 9/23/2023 7:27:00 PM

Yes dear Smita … Surrender brings true freedom. Such wise words . I love ~ silence is a glow that lights up the path ! All my best to you , Susan :)

Smita Kulkarni
Date: 10/14/2023 8:38:00 AM

Thank you, Susan, for your appreciative feedback!