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Burning

Hear the roaring of the wind Hear the screaming of the alarm Jump out as you burn Scream when you see the glass break The power the fire shows making you watch So in a moment of weakness you sit there Watching the embers grow into a monster all in their own Choking in the smoky air Gasping for anything that is clean Hear the cries of the children weeping for their mother to come back Watch as it crumbles the ground Watch as your life falls to ash around your feet Feel the heat of the flames that devour anything in its past Cradle the youngest in your arms whispering it will be ok In that moment you hurt Maybe you are done Maybe it is too much to go on. You just want to sleep You are slipping away You can feel the heartbreaking truth You are alone even being surrounded by people Nothing will be the same

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Date: 10/18/2016 10:43:00 PM
Kiersten Redding, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :) Drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs **YNR - SKAT
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Date: 10/13/2016 8:06:00 PM
Kiersten, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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