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Burning

eyes screaming, out of the smoke out of the flame out of the meat all pretension all aspiration whither in the heat and flame of seeing you walk away of seeing the light turned on roaches scuttling into the shadow my mind, revealed as junk as scum as waste in your absence i stand (crouch) a stink in the clear air a mistake waiting for when i truly truly fail as i failed you as i did not rush to your side offer my flesh my skin my heart let you despair, let you die helped you leave

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 9/8/2015 2:15:00 PM
Ditto... SKAT
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Date: 9/8/2015 2:11:00 PM
Chris, Congratulations on having your poem featured on the home page. **SKAT**
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Date: 5/5/2015 4:57:00 PM
Deep, clever, write! Painting a vivid picture of a sad life experience
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