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Burned Pages

Because of you my life changed Unaccepted but trying to change Riots my mind to change No one can force me to change Enjoying the company of you Days will past in fruitful ways Past will make you change Angry hearts is hard to change Go and let your heart to in love Endangered life will be saved

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/24/2016 6:35:00 PM

Nice to see this one again, Kapitan. LINDA

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 12/10/2015 4:49:00 PM

Kapitan, WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@

Skat A

Date: 12/6/2015 11:46:00 PM

Deep acrostic, Josh, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT

Kapitan Shi
Date: 12/8/2015 4:29:00 AM

Ow...HI...its so nice to see comments from other Poets (well im not that good), im just starting a new hobby here :) tnx a lot sure ill drop some info about me Thanks!

Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 12/6/2015 10:45:00 PM

Hi Josh, this is such an excellent Acrostic and a first posting that I enjoyed reading! I look forward to reading more of your work! Welcome to PoetrySoup and best wishes as you continue to churn out wonderful poetic pieces! Warmest regards and a score of 7! Pan

Kapitan Shi
Date: 12/8/2015 4:32:00 AM

wow...7 is so high for me thanks a lot for a warm welcome :)

Rainbow Promise

Date: 12/6/2015 8:00:00 PM

One has to "want" to change and not forced. He/she has to become aware for that need to change. Do I hear anger? The second line says you're trying to change. Keep the good work up. There are social groups for all types of change if you really want to. Just go on line. God loves you.

Kapitan Shi
Date: 12/6/2015 8:14:00 PM

Thanks a lot, your comment makes me feel "i want to make more poems" :)

Francis Osho

Date: 12/6/2015 7:44:00 PM

nice josh. keep going

Kapitan Shi
Date: 12/6/2015 8:15:00 PM

tnx Francis,, it motivates me! :)