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Burn In

Rise up and smile But dive back down. There's no way out, So keep that frown. Close your eyes And see her now. You could neglect If you knew how. Don't burn out, Love this cloud. Live to one day Make her proud. Hold out your hand And feel the ground. It is nothing but A dream you've found.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 4/8/2016 10:43:00 AM
Bot love and life live encapsulate in your verses proving not only talent, but also virtuosity.Like lyrics waiting for the inner melody. At the moment, it reminds me of Paganini`s Caprices...Or: A handful of dust - a very English novel. Both love and life may be proud and know humiliation, too.Of course the human reason and Enlightenment`s Great Expectations... I liked your poem, and that is my spontaneous thought of admiration.
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Davor Miljkovic
Date: 4/9/2016 10:39:00 AM
Wow, a great thought to read through, thank you :)

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