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I see blinding fire in the sky. I see people burning alive. The smoke rises above town. Water won't quench the flame. I see people die. see people cry. and at last, see me die

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 9/15/2011 7:55:00 AM
the chosen form really suits a poem such as this, which though sad, I found very emotive. Well written.
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Curtis Speede
Date: 7/25/2022 2:08:00 AM
Hey even though it's been a decade... I really wanted to express appreciation for your comment. I was in a darker place when I started poetry. And I remember this one very well.

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