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Buried My Lover

I didn't physically bury, My lover, today. I buried my heart That is lost & fraid. I buried a soul, That's withered away. I buried a love, That's departed astray. I buried a mind, That is lost, in space. I buried a spirit, That use to have grace. I've buried a beauty, That's faded with age. My heart, mind, body & soul I surrender...I live no more...

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 5/4/2014 4:40:00 PM
I feel your pain Cherie...It is not the end but only the beginning...hugs Tim
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Date: 4/29/2014 10:11:00 AM
Hello Cherie, This was heart tugging... This was beautifully written. Thank you for sharing this write with us. Peace, Deborah
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Date: 4/28/2014 6:23:00 AM
Awesome write, Congrats on your poem being featured this week, cherie
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Date: 10/31/2013 11:20:00 PM
This is a deep and heart wrenching write. You allow the reader to feel your pain and anguish in each line. Nice job
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Date: 8/6/2013 6:57:00 PM
Oh Cherie, this is a sad one here, lot of pain and emotion, good job expressing yourself -you can feel it in the words... MC
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Cherie Thomas
Date: 8/6/2013 7:25:00 PM
I kinda wrote that at a bad space in life when, I just was really hurting emotionally but I got over it somewhat it still haunts me but we are hapless romantics im still a hopeless romantic..lol.I dont feel that way anymore:) thanks for your lovely comment...your cool:)
Date: 7/31/2013 2:25:00 PM
You will live one more time, Many more times, Many many more times, All you have to do is Keep on posting excellent poems, Like this one!CU
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Date: 7/31/2013 6:33:00 PM
Hi Gerald,,, almost sounds like reincarnation lol to live that many times:) lovely comment my friend & much appreciated thankyou:) ~<3~ cherie
Date: 6/12/2013 8:13:00 PM
Your right....ink I find it more as a. Mental burying of emotions to make way for the physical new beginings....its just different periods in life where you , learn and grow with experience. Thankyou your insightful:)
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Date: 6/11/2013 2:11:00 PM
I'm sure we all sit and examine ourselves from time to time. This is a strong write. Every individual is treasure to someone or another. Don't be too hard on yourself. :)
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