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Buried Gold

Faint heart once overflown empties alone sinking beneath shell's hardened clay. Saving face, only to trace ring line shown conspicuous on finger yesterday. Blue veins weave below fair skin, weakening. Disturb the routine, no one cares; frown lines curve lower still deepening. Save what's left - dig through hidden layers. Cast out the hatred, the past's mistakes, rise above, be spared future burdened. In spaces unoccupied, heartache's existence spurs apathy to mend. Whoever refuses to sift from the earth promise of gold buried underground and an unsure hand has forgotten the worth of that most precious which can be found.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 1/22/2015 9:50:00 AM
Especially liked the lines about the veins. When you add such lines, it makes the poem come alive.
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Date: 1/6/2015 9:29:00 AM
lovely imagery. All that glitters is not gold. Mohan
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Date: 1/4/2015 1:29:00 PM
very beautifully painted piece rhonda really sings from the title excellent pen dear friend
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Date: 1/4/2015 2:33:00 AM
Excellent , deep and inspirational writing my friend. So many forget that the greatest treasure is true love and family. Your buried gold highlights that folly. A great write it is!! A7..
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Date: 1/2/2015 9:51:00 AM
Amazing Rhonda. Very inspiring ...evoking deep questions. Love Hugs! -Rajat
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Date: 1/2/2015 2:59:00 AM
Oh....how I needed this write today, Rhonda. Bless you for bringing courage and hope. It's such a beautiful write...so much deeper lines. That first stanza mesmerized me. Bless you. Have a great New Year.
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