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Buried Beneath

When the moon smiled crimson weakness departs... Set, you're the storm darkly clouding skies across a red desert stained in an ancient evil being one spawned recoiled serpent deceiver under the sands hides bringing disorder mixed with violence creating war destroying all good where nothing else matters... I turn around looking into your eyes soulfully held captive with shadows helplessly falling to the knees as watchful eyes dart to old desires pulsing ruby red, perfect prey captured and held forever in her clutches drags hearts to their fates... Sapphire seas churn, storms pass the centuries light years from now when the breathless flame burns blue an eclipse totally takes over the heart once upon a time weakness you fall by the way side as strength is held within a union of crowns for she reigns as queen of the heart owns every key to my demise... Buried beneath the sands and times forgotten names and dates written on the surface by her finger, then blown away on the same winds she rides, free to prowl once more. (A collaboration by Liam McDaid & Kelly Deschler)

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 8/16/2016 1:11:00 PM
Thank you for allowing me to write once again with such a talented poet like you, Liam. I grow a little more as a writer every time. Thank you also for encouraging me to keep the ink flowing! :)
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Date: 8/12/2016 10:58:00 AM
- A great, deep and intriguing poem from you two, Liam :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 8/12/2016 9:18:00 AM
Hi Liam!:))Wow!Wow!This is a very profound, and mostly very sad poem that you've written here my dearest friend Liam and this time in collaboration with Kelly.A very deep, sad and kind of dark poem,indeed, but very beautifully written.Awesome!Just dazzling!Excellent imagery! Outstanding collaboration.Your pens are truly mighty golden!A 7 + + + each!A Fav!To me you're always the best in everything Liam.So very beautiful,romantic,gentle and sweet.I really do hope n' pray alot that you're okay in everything,Liam.Please keep positive.Always keeping you in my thoughts n' prayers.Keep your faith!Keep your love hopes n' follow your dreams always too:))Wishing you a very lovely weekend!In His light God bless you always!:))Love n' hugs!xoxox D.^O^
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