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"I have dug my way out the ground with palm and fist many times, my whole life has been one burial after another, I will find my way out of you." -rupi kaur ______________ "Your death was a selfish act . . . driving your car off a cliff- the pain you held ended that day but not for me I have fallen in pits of darkness since- but have found my inner strength and become strong I have buried all those I love, including you- I will go on and be just fine, my love . . . " _______________________________ November 18, 2016 Poetry/Free Verse/Burials Copyright Protected, ID 16-851-154-0 All Rights Reserved. Written under Pseudonym. For the contest, Quote Prompt II sponsor, Laura Loo First Place

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Date: 12/19/2016 11:45:00 AM
Congratulations BW, most deserving...
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Date: 12/18/2016 3:13:00 AM
Just fine...I like your take on the theme. Congratulations on your win, Kai
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Date: 12/17/2016 11:42:00 PM
Congrats on your win with this wonderful response to the quote.
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Date: 12/17/2016 3:21:00 PM
I am in awe of your resilience. Congrats on your win Constance.
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Date: 12/17/2016 1:43:00 PM
I just want to say hugs.
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Date: 12/17/2016 12:48:00 PM
Dear B.W, SO SAD, awesome write, so deep:) Congrats on your win!!Pain of bereavement here, hope there is a quick healing! love, Anu:)
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Date: 12/17/2016 12:12:00 PM
So sad, and even sadder knowing this is true pain you are feeling..beautiful once again lovely lady...thanks and congrats :)-luloo
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Date: 11/23/2016 7:40:00 AM
A great response to the quote, Constance:)
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Date: 11/21/2016 10:32:00 AM
Everything and everyone ends. It is too bad we can't keep our promises when nature has other plans. We are small observers in all of this. Your soul is so kind that I hope it is escorted by angels always. If they are anywhere they are with you.
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Date: 11/18/2016 11:01:00 PM
Very nice indeed ...
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