Burdening

When one is pushed far away, When one is given up on a stone is set deep in the heart, and it grieves me deeply to watch as she walks with burden, please lighten her soul

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Muhammad Safa Thajudeen

Date: 11/20/2014 10:04:00 AM

Let your hand to shake,welcome,welcome to soup as a Souper.The first line is fine.Rrgards. -Safa

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 9/6/2011 7:25:00 AM

A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you this morning Rhoma. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Read and comment on their's and they will return in kind. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love and blessing always, Carol