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Besides the fact that over 90% of an atom is empty space, how much of your love is, too?
The space between us Is mostly air Fingertips brushing What's not really there Jumping through hoops, We get tired and forfeit The momentum that's looped With how little we gain This weight that we're lifting With an open hand, It defines what we mean To the world we live in

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