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Bum's Portrait

He sits with his head upon his hands His eyes are red And water that glued the sands Sun sucked, slithered from the sandy bed His thoughts are the hourglass Grains of meaning mincing away His castle was the sheltered pass Tomorrow in today decay. The officer who came to the door Polite as an exterior of class Knocked his ego to the floor Set his emotions to tinder like grass Dry as the cinders of his life: It was she who picked up the knife She who wanted out as wife So many things unspoken, so much rife And he cannot own that argument again He lost in the public sphere While he was at the war enduring pain Treason was a shift of change here. The officer asked him if he had somewhere To go ... leaving the house his hands built He wandered through the cold night air Racked by conscience alternating guilt. Then here ... to sit and muse alone Rejecting interventions of the court To share what was his own He relinguished property and support Except from the sweet distil of fruit And wanders between the staggering eye Victim of an altered truth Forgotten mortal under infallible sky.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 6/5/2009 2:38:00 AM
My eyes are indeed blessed to read your work.......!!!! what more can I say....??? Excellent!!!!
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Date: 5/10/2009 12:44:00 PM
This poem completely draws you in and surrounds you with emotion, begging the next words to come. I love the imagery of the 1st verse, concluded perfectly with the very last line. Simply divine! Kat x
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Date: 5/10/2009 2:40:00 AM
Another cracking poem L'nass, how lucky we are, James.
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Date: 5/9/2009 7:40:00 AM
Ahhh..words transcribed by this veritable poetic angel. Your muse must cradle your heart and soul. A tender and soulful write; a sad and sensitive story. Beautiful!! God bless you and yours...love, Mikki
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Date: 5/8/2009 7:42:00 PM
holy tomato!!! you speak with blessed heart, my friend.....it just cannot be said any better than your story...how quickly we pass by.....
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Date: 5/8/2009 11:46:00 AM
how hard it is when love ends this way,how hard it is to live again,forgotten mortal under infallible sky,this brought me sadness and made me think deep--wonderful write my friend---charma
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Date: 5/7/2009 5:55:00 AM
A touching write. Filled with so much pain the emotion literally lifts from the page and engulfs the reader with sadness. Very well done. As always your writing draws the reader in making them long for the story to continue. This one calls out for some happiness to come to the subject to give it that happy ending we all hope for. Beautiful but sad. Have a great day and thank you for all of your kind comments! Smiles from Lolita
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