Bummer

My mood has been anything but jolly lately Winter's coming, feels like I've had more than eighty Into hibernation I go Had way too much snow Enough for ten lifetimes, guess I sound like a crybaby © Jack Ellison 2015

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Carol Eastman

Date: 11/2/2015 4:45:00 PM

t sounds like it is time to go on the run... Whiles looking for that southern sun... Then plug in some comedies that are great fun... Remember that you're the happiest son of a gun... So before you follow John John down south don't forget to entertain us some... I'm working on a poem where Dragon visits Washington DC. I expect a lot of trouble he'll be... LOL

Jack Ellison
Date: 11/3/2015 7:17:00 AM

See below! LOL

Carol Eastman

Date: 11/2/2015 4:42:00 PM

Jack Ellison
Date: 11/3/2015 7:17:00 AM

Must check out that poem you're working on!!! Ah winter will be here and gone and before we know it... GLORIOUS SPRING!!! Love Santa xx

Tim Smith

Date: 11/1/2015 12:50:00 PM

Eat lots of fish, that's what bears do....it will give you plenty energy to get you through...put on yer night shirt....and lay in the dirt....I'll see you in spring, when you have come to

Jack Ellison
Date: 11/3/2015 7:14:00 AM

As Canadian winters go, ours here in Southern Ontario are relatively mild! NOTE: We're on the same latitude as Northern California... check it out!!!

Judy Konos

Date: 11/1/2015 8:00:00 AM

You sound like a Canadian who needs to pack up and check into a Florida resort...sail on a boat, picnic in the sand with grit in your teeth....spit it out and start over....with no snow....told you it was cold there..........

Jack Ellison
Date: 11/1/2015 8:06:00 AM

Spent about 25 years of winters down on those Florida beaches (Siesta Key)! Those were the best times of my life!!! Winters up here are getting more and more difficult to get through, the older I get! Can I come live with you??? xxx