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This poem is included in my Book/eBook ‘Clive’s Uni-Verse – A Cornishman’s take on life’.  Published by Olympia Publishers in Jan 2022.

I loves … I loves … Bumbly Bees, With skinny legs And big fat knees. With golden rings And black ones too, They buzzy buzz As all bees do. They hover low As they have planned, Choose a flower And then they land. Grabs some pollen And buzzes away, But will be back One bumbly day. I loves … I loves … Bumbly Bees, With skinny legs And big fat knees.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2021




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Date: 12/4/2021 3:04:00 AM
This should be a children’s book. The flow is just perfect. :)
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Date: 12/4/2021 11:16:00 PM
That is a lovely positive and very kind comment ... Thank you for making it ~ Clive :)

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