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Bumblebees

bumblebees flit from flower to flower -- a soft breeze blows 3/13/12 by Kim Merryman for PD's "Favorite or Best Haiku" contest

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Date: 7/7/2012 8:24:00 AM
Hi Kim - This elicits images of a beautiful summer day. Thank you for your encouraging words about my poetry. Enjoy your weekend. - Gail
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Date: 3/24/2012 1:10:00 PM
congratulations on your win! a pretty scene :)
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Date: 3/23/2012 5:25:00 AM
While stopping by to read your wonderful poetry I want to say thank you for the kind comments you have left on mine. I hope you have a beautiful weekend and find it full of inspiration Kim. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/22/2012 5:23:00 PM
Celebrating this winning haiku, Kim...I love bumblebees and the MOMENT you captured...I just have to keep my distance from them. ha ha. Glad u enjoyed my mVA poem...all smiles here. Love, Gwendolen
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Date: 3/19/2012 1:34:00 PM
So sweet. I love bumblebees and I love this poem! Always, Laura
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Date: 3/19/2012 6:14:00 AM
Congratulations on your placement in P.D.'s "Haiku" contest Kim. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/19/2012 1:54:00 AM
I could just imagine that bumblee buzzing and flitting from flower to flower, very nice, Kim! :D
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Date: 3/18/2012 5:13:00 PM
So easy breezy this one reads!! Congrats, sweet Kim.
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Date: 3/16/2012 9:16:00 PM
congrats Kim on another amazing win for this wonderful write luv..
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Date: 3/16/2012 8:47:00 PM
Thank God for the bees, I love their honey, a lovely Haiku.. Thanks for sharing it. God bless you. Hugs!Erich
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Date: 3/16/2012 5:28:00 PM
wonderful Kim. harry
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Date: 3/16/2012 8:22:00 AM
Congrats, Kim. Excellent write. Enjoyed. Nice going, my friend. luv and hugs, Ralphie
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Date: 3/16/2012 12:44:00 AM
a winner it is,kim... my sweet congrats!...:) huggs!
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Date: 3/15/2012 10:51:00 PM
KIM, ~.Congratulations in my haiku contest ;-) THANK YOU FOR SUPPORTING ;-) my contest... Enjoyed your entry,~ always*PD
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Date: 3/15/2012 8:47:00 PM
Cute as can BEE
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Date: 3/15/2012 6:15:00 AM
Oh lovely..no wonder its your fav Ku'.. Hugs xxx
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Date: 3/14/2012 6:37:00 PM
Enjoyed this one..The bumble bees are already out here as are wasps and yellow jackets..They scare me for their sting is very painful and can be fatal..Reads like winning material that you have written..Good luck in the contest..Sara
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Date: 3/14/2012 3:47:00 PM
Loved the gentle imagery Kim best wishes in the contest , Declan xxx
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Date: 3/14/2012 11:22:00 AM
Yes Kim - I see those little guys.. very nice picture you draw.
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Date: 3/14/2012 10:01:00 AM
Kim,. , good afternoon. :-) ,lol..my x must have been the king of bumblebeed.. ooo, and this is for my contest.. smooth one..love it..God bless ¤ always PD
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