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Bum Burns

Bum Burns In the nearby park Uncle Johnny With a big full round tummy Touched group of red ants They ran up in his pants Badly bit poor Johnny's bummy. Contest:Limerick II Sponsor:Jan Allison 21.02 15

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Date: 3/15/2016 12:18:00 AM
Rizwana, Congrats on your limerick win. Luv ~LINDA~
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Date: 3/8/2016 2:44:00 AM
It's fine Jan.....thnk you.....if you cld just guide me to correct myself ...I'll be obliged....I ll edit this poem for bttr....regards
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Date: 3/7/2016 9:29:00 AM
Congrats Rizwana - you would have placed higher if the end rhyme and syllable count had been more consistent:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 3/6/2016 8:39:00 PM
haha... nice write, Rizwana, congratulations on your limerick win a 7 :) Hugs Eve
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Rizwana Bhurani
Date: 3/8/2016 2:44:00 AM
Thnk you......regards
Date: 3/6/2016 7:41:00 PM
haha. cute one. Congrats for win.
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Rizwana Bhurani
Date: 3/8/2016 2:45:00 AM
Thnk you....regards
Date: 2/27/2016 10:08:00 AM
Thnk you...regards
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Date: 2/27/2016 8:35:00 AM
Lol! Cute.
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