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Bulbs Among Sustainers

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Set some goals Set out bulbs Bulbs planted in garden Bulbs planted in beds Beds filled with blooms Beds are warm Warm days bring flowers Warm beds rest Rest equals health Rest for weary Weary souls faint Weary hearts mourn Mourn love lost Mourn departed Departed is gloom Departed is pressure Pressure creates diamonds Pressure can explode Explode from anger Explode from dynamite Dynamite dangerous Dynamite has use Use has purpose Use for things Things for jobs Things are inventions Inventions make life easy Inventions save time Time passes by Time is rationed Rationed are minutes Rationed are seconds Seconds make minutes Seconds compose life Life is good Life is granted Granted are your days Granted each year Year makes lifetime Year make one old Old people die Old people get weak Weak seek God Weak need help Help comes from God Help is a sustainer Sustainers keep going Sustainers are awesome Awesome Going

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Regina Elliott

Date: 2/3/2024 10:22:00 AM

Wow, a big FAVE, Sara. You've crafted your words so well for this fine blitz poem. If this is for Silent One's contest, my very best wishes for the contest. A fine contender for it. Many blessings to you and your's. ~

Sara Kendrick
Date: 2/3/2024 12:56:00 PM

I am honored you would fav it, Regina. I appreciate the high praise. Thanks for the blessings because I need all I can get. Sara K

Anisha Dutta

Date: 2/3/2024 8:17:00 AM

Easy flow. Nice to read. Sure to win. Love.

Sara Kendrick
Date: 2/3/2024 9:58:00 AM

Thank you, Anisha. It is not for the contest but thank you. Sara K

Ink Empress

Date: 2/3/2024 4:10:00 AM

Wow you did this form so well dear sara, i love it! It flows just seamlessly with so many thoughts phrased in the most captivating manner, i love warm days bring flowers and also the ending, yes weak seek Faith and also need help. How creative and soulful is every line in this. Im sure this will do very well in the contest, pleasure reading your work. Sendin you light always

Sara Kendrick
Date: 2/3/2024 6:52:00 AM

IE, not for the contest or at least I don't think I put it in there. LOL..I will have to look and see if I did. Thanks for the visit. Sara K

Howard Kerr

Date: 2/3/2024 1:51:00 AM

Hi Sara, This is an exemplary Blitz. It is plausible, pleasing, and pertinent. Wondrous flow and equally wonderful word deployment. Howard

Sara Kendrick
Date: 2/3/2024 6:51:00 AM

Thank you, Howard. I appreciate the kind review. I am going to try writing another one. Sara K

Yann Rolland

Date: 2/3/2024 12:16:00 AM

between bulbs and dynamite only a poet can cross the line, this si wonderful and touching, thanks poet

Sara Kendrick
Date: 2/3/2024 12:44:00 AM

Far fetched. LOL..Thank you, Yann. Sara K

Bill Baker

Date: 2/2/2024 4:46:00 PM

Awesome poetry, Sara. I've never seen this form before, but it looks like fun to write this way. Thanks for sharing the form with us. I bet some others give it a try. Smiles ~ Blessings Bill

Sara Kendrick
Date: 2/3/2024 12:43:00 AM

Well, Bill, it was not so easy. You are really supposed to write it fast and not give it any thought, but sometimes nothing comes and you have to give it thought. LOL..I guess age. Thanks for dropping by. Sara K

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 2/2/2024 2:27:00 PM

outstanding Blitz, Sara K! The flow and train of thought made for a compelling read. I like 'help is a sustainer'--well said. Enjoy your evening, Sara

Sara Kendrick
Date: 2/3/2024 12:42:00 AM

It was a rough night, Sara B. One of those nights that not much sleep was happening. They come on occasion. Thanks for the visit. Sara K

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 2/2/2024 9:15:00 AM

Brilliant. I like most the idea that God helps us.

Sara Kendrick
Date: 2/2/2024 1:35:00 PM

Yes, He does mostly in the form of other people. Thanks for the visit. Sara K