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"Building Tension," written for Edward Ibeh's This or That Poetry Contest, Febrary 26, 2024

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ the arrow endures the bowstring's tension so that in the release it becomes more than itself

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Edward Ibeh

Date: 3/4/2024 9:03:00 AM

Heartiest congratulations on your podium win in my contest with this superb Kimo poem, Sara:-) Succinct yet packs a wallop! Bravo!

Christuraj Alex

Date: 3/1/2024 8:19:00 PM

A very beautiful kimo. Speaks volumes. Congratulations!

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 3/1/2024 8:43:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your wonderful "Building Tension" write. Few words with much said. "So True" Have a great/blessed day with your win.....................

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 3/1/2024 2:46:00 PM

thanks for your visit, Paula, and for your kind and congratulatory words. Have a blessed evening, hugs, Sara

Jerry Brotherton

Date: 2/28/2024 5:54:00 PM

We all become the sum of the people that surround us. A wonderful Kimo, my friend.

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 2/29/2024 4:22:00 AM

wise words, my poet friend. I'm grateful for your positive comments and visit. Have a pleasant Thursday, Sara

Sara Kendrick

Date: 2/27/2024 12:50:00 AM

I like this one, Sara B. It can bring food to the table or do damage. Thanks for sharing it with us. Sara K

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 2/27/2024 5:24:00 AM

I agree...one's intention is a powerful force. Have a great day, Sara B

Aurore Severo

Date: 2/26/2024 9:22:00 PM

In 3 lines you have said things could take a book. :)

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 2/27/2024 4:44:00 AM

thank you, Aurore, for visiting and for your lovely comments. Have a pleasant day, Sara

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 2/26/2024 7:46:00 PM

Very good, Sara!

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 2/27/2024 4:45:00 AM

thanks dear Kim!

Bill Baker

Date: 2/26/2024 6:59:00 PM

Whoa! powerful poetry in this Kimo, Sara. Good entry for the contest ... good luck! Bill

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 2/27/2024 4:45:00 AM

awww, thank you hubby for your enthusiasm and encouragement, hugs, me

The Situation

Date: 2/26/2024 6:04:00 PM

yes, thought provoking. Could be used as a quote.

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 2/26/2024 6:06:00 PM

thank you, I agree...thanks for stopping by. Have a pleasant evening, Sara

Karen Jones

Date: 2/26/2024 4:54:00 PM

Deep and thought provoking

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 2/26/2024 5:41:00 PM

thank you!

Daniel Henry Rodgers

Date: 2/26/2024 3:58:00 PM

Dear Sara, Your poem is stunning as always! The way you capture the anticipation and transformation in such concise imagery is truly powerful. The arrow, enduring the bowstring's tension, becomes a metaphor for something much deeper. It shows us that sometimes the greatest growth and potential come from facing challenges and pushing our limits. The ending line is particularly impactful. It leaves the reader with a sense of wonder, pondering the potential that lies within each of us when we embrace and navigate through challenging situations. - Blessings, Daniel

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 2/26/2024 5:42:00 PM

I appreciate your visit, Daniel...and I'm always grateful for your insights into my poem's construction and meaning. You 'got' my poem! Color me delighted! :-) Have a splendid evening, Sara