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Happy family on the billboard: mother, father, darling child; this prime apartment their reward in modern geometric style. Two bedrooms, one on mezzanine with en-suite bathroom, air con cooled; green river bank a space to dream, for exercise a chlorine pool. From high above the building site, conductor of the symphony, the guiding crane, positions right each block, each beam in harmony. Minions moving much like robots lift and carry, lay brick on brick in heat or rain that never stops. End of shift they shower in public, a ready smile though life seems tough; steamed white rice all eat together, in shelters made from scrap sleep rough. Might they never dream of better?

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Date: 5/13/2015 12:26:00 PM
Mark, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry when you are ready :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@"
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Date: 5/12/2015 2:28:00 PM
- A new "poet" at the P Soup :) - I welcome you with your first great poem, Mark :) - I hope you will find much pleasure to share your words and thoughts here with us - Best of luck! - // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 5/12/2015 2:04:00 PM
MARK. Thank you for sharing, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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